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Post by gypsy on Mar 24, 2024 12:27:19 GMT -5
One (moment)
Void realized it
existed & wondered
what 0ne was
next
Void created
it
filled & unavoided
the realization of
time
j-a c 2024
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Post by goldenmyst on Mar 24, 2024 18:54:42 GMT -5
Superb use of void woven into fantastic poetic tapestry. Void is used in Buddhism a lot and your poem brings into focus the concept with brilliant and vivid art of words. Love what you created here from your soul for us to see.
John
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Post by goldenmyst on Mar 26, 2024 21:44:08 GMT -5
Love the new title. Perfectly scribed.
John
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Post by gypsy on Mar 29, 2024 8:21:17 GMT -5
Thanks, John.
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