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Post by acutesteelepyro on Jul 8, 2021 13:51:02 GMT -5
These people say they can not bend On these actions we can not ascend
Brewing hate everyday based on race Expecting everyone to keep the pace
Completely ignoring the trueths in lore
We all understand for ourselves we fend We all know of the tomorrow around the bend
Why is it ok to judge based on face As we pretend we want equality of race
Steering us wrecklessly to pain and gore
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Post by Bromanoph on Jul 8, 2021 18:04:26 GMT -5
Well said/written. Good to have you back in the Blue!
Much Love, Brom.
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Post by acutesteelepyro on Jul 9, 2021 2:58:34 GMT -5
Well said/written. Good to have you back in the Blue! Much Love, Brom. A pleasure Bro as always , Thank you
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Post by piph on Jul 13, 2021 16:50:27 GMT -5
Divide and conquer - t'was ever thus
Identity, fleeting as it is, is leveraged by the powerful to get what they want pitting soul against soul
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 13, 2021 21:27:02 GMT -5
acutesteelepyro, your use of rhythm for this poem is grand. I really thought your insight here on people who profess to be against racism but judging their personal friendship circle by color was profound. Truly a great poem.
John
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Post by acutesteelepyro on Jul 15, 2021 8:10:24 GMT -5
Hate is a long dark road , Unfortunately it is easier traveled if people think they can righteously do so ... Remember to be awsome to eatchother my friends
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Post by beki on Jul 16, 2021 20:11:37 GMT -5
Important message...well said
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Post by onomotopoeia on Aug 2, 2021 19:21:59 GMT -5
sad that these things still merit discussion, but they do. Well said
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Post by beki on Aug 8, 2021 0:39:35 GMT -5
Taking a look again i like the format of your poem
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Post by petra6 on Dec 1, 2021 18:30:01 GMT -5
Good rap.
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