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Post by winddance on Jul 12, 2021 11:32:22 GMT -5
deep dark water closes in over my head inky and cold disorienting pressure builds body chills falling upward sinking downward no sight no sound only a pound in my heart in my ears my fears deep dark water
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Post by Bromanoph on Jul 12, 2021 16:40:24 GMT -5
Very visceral. Well done.
Much Love, Brom.
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Post by piph on Jul 13, 2021 16:48:23 GMT -5
indeed, quite visceral
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Post by acutesteelepyro on Jul 15, 2021 8:07:34 GMT -5
Thud thud A last gasp of ink
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Post by beki on Jul 16, 2021 20:14:07 GMT -5
Weii done. The short brief lines mimic the short quick breaths and the downward movement of the brief lines indicate the sinking drowning subject. Very well done
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Post by onomotopoeia on Aug 2, 2021 19:20:50 GMT -5
Nicely done!
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Post by petra6 on Nov 26, 2021 0:13:30 GMT -5
deep dark water closes in over my head inky and cold disorienting pressure builds body chills falling upward sinking downward no sight no sound only a pound in my heart in my ears my fears deep dark water
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Post by petra6 on Nov 26, 2021 0:15:11 GMT -5
I know that fear, it is horrible, well described
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