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Post by Bromanoph on Jul 1, 2021 14:18:23 GMT -5
Apothecary Lady of life well-living; I know you by many names but cannot claim or own any.
I can only be here trying hardest to be the man to call You Wife: to behold your life, to hold your struggles at bay while thunder cries, lightning lightens everything, illuminating the singing grace of what we call Home.
I am this man. I am this man before You. I am this simply complicated man standing before You, asking You
(gently, seriously, please...)
Love me as I do You.
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Post by beki on Jul 1, 2021 15:59:10 GMT -5
I like it...Brom returns!
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 4, 2021 1:05:04 GMT -5
Brom, this is an incredibly rich entreaty to the one you love. She must really love you with your dedication to her. I love this more than any marital poem I've encountered. It moved me in indescribable ways.
John
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Post by spiroszafiris on Jul 4, 2021 2:55:03 GMT -5
..strong stuff..a pleasure to read
.>sp ___________
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Post by acutesteelepyro on Jul 9, 2021 2:49:27 GMT -5
Ok Its driving me nuts , My brain says there is structure here but I see chaos ? Is it structured chaos ? A format I dont see ? Is the structure riding emotion The harder I look , The more it illudes me . I hope not to offend the magician but.... curiosity and all that
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Post by Bromanoph on Jul 10, 2021 16:46:25 GMT -5
Pyro...I can answer if your question is more specific...
I don't normally write anything with structure, other than the chaotic style I have been writing in since I started writing. It flows to and through me at random and I only write it down if I particularly like a certain line or word combination.
Thanks for reading. Much Love, Brom.
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Post by agrimmeer on Jul 11, 2021 19:52:44 GMT -5
I would like to think that any person’s home (of grace) looks more glorious when lit by lightning’s light.
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Post by acutesteelepyro on Jul 15, 2021 8:13:40 GMT -5
Pyro...I can answer if your question is more specific... I don't normally write anything with structure, other than the chaotic style I have been writing in since I started writing. It flows to and through me at random and I only write it down if I particularly like a certain line or word combination. Thanks for reading. Much Love, Brom. Actually That answered my question
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Post by onomotopoeia on Aug 2, 2021 19:28:32 GMT -5
I was never a fan of structure in life or poetry, did always enjoy your work though. Nice to read you again!
-Bryan
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Post by Bromanoph on Dec 11, 2021 23:14:52 GMT -5
Thank you, Bryan.
Much Love, David.
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Post by Petra on Dec 23, 2021 1:11:43 GMT -5
Simply complicated man is a nice irony david, and the sentiment of the poem is palpable. Thanks for these words
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Post by sillylillylightbulb on Jan 24, 2023 19:31:38 GMT -5
With Divinity
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