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Post by gypsy on Dec 13, 2022 16:16:09 GMT -5
‘WORDS’
(his)
do/mi/noes
s p a c e d o u t
do mi na tion
in a tick ing bomb
(hers)
milk & honey
p o u r e d
in
wielding his (s)words into plowshares
j-a c © 2022
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Post by goldenmyst on Dec 13, 2022 21:41:41 GMT -5
Josee,
This is a mindwalk of magnificent proportions. You took me down the gender lane into the heart of feminine wisdom. Each letter and line was a miracle. Women know the way to peace. And your use of the Biblical passage made for deep thought and feeling in a way that woman can teach.
John
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Post by Bromanoph on Dec 13, 2022 21:42:26 GMT -5
Beautifully written, dear poet.
Thank you for sharing.
So happy to see you back in the Blue writing and posting!
Much Love, David.
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Post by gypsy on Dec 14, 2022 15:27:26 GMT -5
Thank you, gentlemen.
I will be returning to my roots - social-political poetry.
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