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Post by gypsy on Dec 14, 2022 19:55:09 GMT -5
the bed of the ebb
is
a sheet of whispered water
a shore of winded waves
is
the nest of the shells
‘’Deserted swells’’ -j-a (November 2022)
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Post by goldenmyst on Dec 14, 2022 19:59:33 GMT -5
Such a nest is a maritime paradise for the eyes and ears.
John
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Post by gypsy on Dec 14, 2022 20:24:12 GMT -5
…and so it goes
to & fro a wooden boat
a rolling coast letting go
And so it goes…
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tide
Dec 14, 2022 20:30:59 GMT -5
Post by goldenmyst on Dec 14, 2022 20:30:59 GMT -5
sad old mariner rows into sunset delirium where cetaceans roam and greet him with the dawn from humpback to Narwhal unicorn of the ocean's eye
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Post by gypsy on Dec 14, 2022 20:54:12 GMT -5
Hands wrinkled, he begins to blow, barely holding his Monica still. « A seasong for Ernie… », he now speaks to birds. «The best gull a guy ever had!” I may just be, maybe, be mad.
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tide
Dec 14, 2022 21:08:40 GMT -5
Post by goldenmyst on Dec 14, 2022 21:08:40 GMT -5
I am beautifully topped!
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Post by gypsy on Dec 14, 2022 21:23:37 GMT -5
Why am I showing up like a new member? I think I earned a title. Lol.
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tide
Dec 14, 2022 21:38:01 GMT -5
Post by goldenmyst on Dec 14, 2022 21:38:01 GMT -5
I think so so my friend. Priestess of Poetry.
John
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tide
Dec 14, 2022 21:38:58 GMT -5
Post by goldenmyst on Dec 14, 2022 21:38:58 GMT -5
Pythian Poet
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tide
Dec 14, 2022 21:39:47 GMT -5
Post by goldenmyst on Dec 14, 2022 21:39:47 GMT -5
Rainbow Prophetess
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Post by gypsy on Dec 14, 2022 22:37:13 GMT -5
welding my words with a wit, allowing the wick to be lit & the wax to be spilt, while inking the script with a tip of a quill, until it has made its own will.
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tide
Dec 14, 2022 23:11:54 GMT -5
Post by goldenmyst on Dec 14, 2022 23:11:54 GMT -5
You extended the candle and wax metaphor into your own domain and rightfully so. Love how you took it to an affirmation of the most determined ending.
John
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tide
Dec 16, 2022 21:42:08 GMT -5
via mobile
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Post by Bromanoph on Dec 16, 2022 21:42:08 GMT -5
Josée Anne, it is indescribably awesome to have you return and post and share your beautiful work.
i read this.
paul kren would approve.
Much Love, Brom
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