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Post by gypsy on Jan 9, 2023 1:43:05 GMT -5
i am hanging
by a thread by a string
in a whirlwind unharnessed
(but I Am)
i am hanging
by a strand by a breath
in a whisper un-silenced
(but I Am)
and therefore from hence
i am lea ping
ping lea am i
from hence
and therefore
un-silenced in a whisper
by a breath by a strand
i am hanging
unharnessed in a whirlwind
by a string by a thread
i am hanging
'in the fold' j-a 2022 ©
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Post by goldenmyst on Jan 13, 2023 18:57:24 GMT -5
Your refrains made for a fantastic rhythm. They surged into existential angst yet were told in a sober and calm way. And that last line tied it all together wonderfully. We are all in the fold even when hanging by a thread.
John
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Post by Bromanoph on Mar 3, 2023 17:15:00 GMT -5
All I can say at the moment is WOW.
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