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Post by gypsy on Jun 9, 2023 12:27:18 GMT -5
you were the pebble the pond whetting the aside beside itself
i was the curtain tide the skirt parting the bed beneath ourselves
in the coulisses in the crevasses
we were pressing the scene the wetting on repeat ironing ourselves to ripples
j-a c 2023
for r.c.nostalgia
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Post by goldenmyst on Jun 9, 2023 17:21:55 GMT -5
Autumn tree’s palette Reflected in pond Ripples from thrown rock Into myriad mirrors Our maple leaf waltz
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Post by gypsy on Jun 10, 2023 10:39:18 GMT -5
Nice one, my friend.
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ripples
Jul 28, 2023 16:59:14 GMT -5
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Post by Bromanoph on Jul 28, 2023 16:59:14 GMT -5
Love this...the metaphor extends throughout and finds full completion.
Well done! Much Love, David
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