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Post by gypsy on Jun 25, 2023 14:47:40 GMT -5
love is un not on
condition of it is not
in pollen unweighed
un is unafraid inlaid
un is not um but om
it is miele’s comb
waxed once begun
love is the om-un
or we are all un done
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 19, 2023 22:29:08 GMT -5
This has a graceful symmetry and deep meaning with those last lines a caveat for humanity. Superbly wrought poetry my friend, as I have come to expect from you.
John
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Post by Bromanoph on Jul 20, 2023 15:42:40 GMT -5
Deep. I love this, especially the culmination in honey at the end. Well done!
Much Love, David
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